Moving On

I take full responsibility for myself and my work. It seems not everyone agrees with that. I wasn't going to post anything else about Damnation Books. I planned to only post the full history that you can see here and be done with it. Move on. My contract expired. I was done with the publisher. Nothing more needed to be said.

Kim Richards, however, as per usual, has refused. She never contacted me about my contract. I started the following email exchange a day after my contract had officially expired.

Personal information is blacked out.

I never heard from her again. I would have expected anyone involved in a publishing business to at least say, of course we're not going to sell new copies past September 9. But, you know what they say about expectations. Don't have any and you'll never be disappointed. Well, I was disappointed.

I waited patiently until September 24. Nothing in my mailbox. With a Cease and Desist I prepared in advance, I mailed it to her. Or rather, the Damnation Books P.O. Box. I also forwarded a copy to Amazon and B&N with the following letter:

The one I sent to B&N is identical. Within three days, the listing was removed from the two retailers. I thanked them both. I'm impressed by how swiftly they handled the matter. Neither were aware that the book is out of print and they also  thanked me for informing them. I thought, fantastic, it's done. I can move on now. I don't need to do anything else. It's over.

Today, I received an email from Kim, which she sent to my old yahoo account instead of my gmail.

Kim:

 Me:

Kim, again:

I can't be bothered to respond to empty threats filled with false information. My last reply was simply, “Saved for evidence. Thank you.”

I prefer to end such uselessly dramatic episodes with a lesson learned, but I'm not sure what to say. Run away screaming at the first hint of childishness? Easy to say in retrospect. In truth, I think I just have shitty luck. But that's okay. I'm ready to move on.

The Sordid Tale of Damnation Books

While this will be a long post, I hope everyone sees it a warning message to other online authors. Bear with me, there is a happy ending.

I first met Kim Richards Gilchrist, currently the CEO of Damnation Books, in an group called Dark Fiction Guild back in 2009. The DFG has since moved to Facebook and it's no longer the active discussion group it once was. It happens, the internet moves fast. Kim had made an announcement in DFG that she and her husband William are starting a new ebook company called Damnation Books. She invited authors in the DFG to submit. I spoke with her directly, asked if a story like Eden Fell would be of interest. She said she might be interested so I sent it along.

I always did find it weird to get an acceptance within two weeks of submission. I wrote the story in 2002 and honestly expected a rejection. But I figured, okay, I guess it's ready. So, I made a full commitment to editing and preparing for publication, whatever I had to do, I was willing. I loved the idea of supporting a mom and pop shop right at the beginning then watching them grow. Then... shit hit fan.

There's been problems with Damnation Books from day one. I'm not the only author. I wouldn't wish this publisher on my worse enemy. A few authors have since made their woes public. Tim Marquitz, Mark Edward Hall, Terri Bruce, Alex Smith. There might be others, but they haven't made it public, and I respect their privacy. Yet it's my hope that more authors will come out and stand up for themselves.

The following is my personal experience dealing with Kim. I never met William, he doesn't seem to really be there. It's not so much what Kim does, it's the way she does things. Kim doesn't communicate. Ever.

The first thing I told Kim, would you prefer the story rewritten in American English? It's loosely set in an unnamed Canadian city and you are based in California. She said, “No, the Canadian English doesn't distract from the story.” Odd thing to say, I thought. That wouldn't have occurred to me. I was thinking more so consistency and marketing, but whatever, less work for me. So I shrugged it off.

When I received the first round of edits, I was given two weeks, and what was the first thing I saw? Corrections of the Canadian English. I sighed and thought, fine, she does want it in American English after all. But when I reached the half-way point with the first round of edits, I reached my boiling point. So much had been inserted into the manuscript. The ignorance of these mistakes was offensive. I thought, this is ridiculous, I have to say something.

I sent an email to Kim, expressing my frustrations. She lectured me and said, “You signed a contact! You have to do the edits!” Also, she attempted to convince me I was just gripping because the story was cut to ribbons. One, I never said I wouldn't do the edits. I just had a serious problem with inserting another person's obvious mistakes. Two, not even a two letter word had been cut. No editing whatsoever. So, I offered a compromise since at least one of us had to be an adult, and said, I'll finish the edits and put in notes showing why and how the mistakes are wrong. In essence, two rounds of edits in one, in a measly two weeks, despite the fact my contract says a max of two rounds of edits, I ended up doing a total of three. Kim saw what I had done and said she'll pass it on to another editor, as if she was doing a big favor to me.

In the second round of edits, I was given a week. Kim ignored each one of my notes and had them all removed. In this second round I was sent a form to fill out, numbering each correction that was needed. I found over 180 grammar, spelling, punctuation, and inconsistency errors that Kim had inserted into the manuscript. I found only two of my own tiny typos that I hadn't caught before. Seeing the story shredded to ribbons would have been easier to deal with than that. I let go of a lot of little things and just kinda... lost heart. I never received the chance to improve the story. At least the other editor agreed with all of my corrections and the majority of mistakes were removed.

Still, I soldiered on, hoping to sell at least a few copies. I meticulously went through the list of reviewers Kim had provided. 75% of the links were dead. One reviewer responded, said in no uncertain terms that he ever reviews ebooks, then weirdly asked me to send the PDF ARC. A couple of weeks later he destroyed me in a review, using me as an example to show that ebooks are oh so bad. Humiliated, I shared the review in the Damnation Authors Yahoo group Kim had created. She mocked me for the review and didn't take any responsibility for the fact she had provided that list of reviewers in the first place. I gritted my teeth and ignored. I kept trying to get reviews... or something... without any support from the publisher.

Through the internet grapevine I heard about Bitten by Books, a popular and well-respected reviewer of paranormal books. I submitted and crossed my fingers. They accepted! I received a wonderful 4 star review that was very fair. The reviewer mentioned the grammar and punctuation errors, and I'm glad she did. I wish more reviewers were that honest. Excited, I shared it with the authors group. I thanked the reviewer for her honesty on the webpage for the review. A little while later, Kim showed up and also posted on that webpage, stating that she thought the story is suppose to be this way. She... trolls... reviews.

I stopped all promotions. Hell-bent on sabotaging her own authors? Screw it. I'm not playing that game. In the five years Eden Fell was published by Damnation Books, I've earned maybe $30 in royalties. The book died before it had a chance.

There's a rather long list of other problems. Lies about the print version, lies and arguments about distribution, horrible formatting, refusal to fix any problems, all kinds of useless drama, and overall a lot of unprofessional childish behavior. Working with Kim is like working with a petulant child. Then word came that Kim and William had decided to buy two ePublishers that had gone bankrupt. One of them is still alive, Eternal Press. Shortly after, Damnation Books was registered as a corporation. That mom and pop shop I wanted to support? It became a vanity press, complete with kill fees of up to $1000. And it's all fake.

I needed to share the full history in order to explain my next statements. Those who have read Eden Fell, for the most part, liked the story. Not long after Damnation Books started, the popularity of online self-published books exploded. Also, this weird idea that everyone has to support indies under penalty of death. Well, while I'm grateful for nice reviewers, the truth is, every nice review made it that much harder for me. And I couldn't say anything until my contract expired. I got full blame for all the mistakes. I was patted on the head and given a patronizing, good job! Not everyone, but enough. And Damnation Books has yet to take responsibility for their own screw-ups. Why should they? Authors get the blame and Kim can keep trolling along as a vanity press, making money from charging authors unjustified fees instead of book sales.

Over-indulgent reviews can hurt authors far more than the worse one star review.

I decided to wait until my contact expired. Since I was part of the first batch of authors, there aren't any kill fees in my contract. I had other things to work on, other projects, and, you know, a life. I was never dependent on Eden Fell to be some kind of launchpad for my writing career, nor did I ever think the story would become a best-seller. It's dead weight, so I waited. As of Sept 9^th, 2014, last Tuesday, my contract has expired. I am no longer connected with Damnation Books and will never deal with them again. Eden Fell is now out of print, any new copies sold are illegal. If anyone wants a copy I suggest searching for used copies or contact me and arrangements will be made.

And now for the good news! *trumpets blare* The essence of the story will be republished on my website as.... wait for it... a graphic novel! The new title is The Ash Garden. I've set a tentative date of October 1^st. Full issues with be self-published with comixology, hopefully all will go smoothly. Stay tuned, big things are happening very soon.

Meanwhile, enjoy the mock up of the new cover for The Ash Garden!

Jason Kahn - The Killer Within

Jason Kahn is the author of the short story The Killer Within, a paranormal cop thriller published by Damnation Books. He has written several fantasy short stories and he's currently producing a serial called The Dark InSpectre.

He's a family man, a renaissance man and a gracious gentleman when someone misspells his last name. Yeah, I once made the mistake of spelling it Khan instead of Kahn. Sorry, Jason.

Interview with Jason Kahn

Lily: What was your inspiration for The Killer Within?

Jason: I was sitting in a cab in midtown Manhattan, listening to the news on the radio. There was a report about some random killing, and I thought to myself: What if the killer didn’t have a choice? What if he was compelled somehow, by some outside force, maybe hypnosis? Maybe a drug? The drug idea stuck with me, and then the idea followed about how the police would possibly try and combat something like that. I liked the idea of no one knowing who the next killer would be, and the nervous tension that could create. Overall I really wanted to tell a hard-boiled crime thriller.

Lily: Tell me all about The Dark InSpectre. Every time I see that title I hear the Inspector Gadget theme song in my head and I'm quite sure I have it all wrong.

Jason: That's very funny, you are the second person who has told me that, the first one being the editor of Abandoned Towers magazine, which is publishing the series. I was aware of that show growing up, but never really watched it, and so was oblivious to the natural connection that I'm sure is obvious to everyone but me. Ah well...

The inspiration for the series came from a dream I had, which turned into the first scene of the story. It involved the psychic ghost of a dead girl leading the main character, a telepathic cop (me in my dream), into a room with four prisoners (brothers) encased in blocks of semi-translucent material. Yes, I know, very strange dream. But more important than the actual scene was the mood. It was futuristic and very dark and brooding. I mulled over my dream for about a month as I wound a story around it. I saw it as a cross between L.A. Confidential and the psi-core of Babylon 5. And at heart it was another hardboiled crime thriller.

The Dark InSpectre was originally a single-piece story. But it was a funny length, about 13,000 words, and I had real trouble finding someone to publish a short story of that size until the editor at Abandoned Towers magazine said she likes to serialize these sorts of things. She was very instrumental in achieving the final form of the story, too. I had already finished The Killer Within, and submitted The Dark InSpectre. The editor of AT said it really came off as "soft-boiled," and suggested I read some real crime fiction and give it a re-write. So I did, I read some Raymond Chandler, Peter Lovesey, and then I read James Ellroy. He wrote The Black Dahlia, L.A. Confidential (remember me mentioning that?), and many more. He absolutely blew my mind. After reading a few of his books, I did my revisions. So if you compare them, The Killer Within and The Dark InSpectre are both hardboiled crime thrillers, but The Dark InSpectre is much darker, with much more of the supernatural angle. And they are both immensely fun to write.

Lily: Your serial and the story The Killer Within are heavily focused on crime fiction and you've written fantasy stories. Are those your main interest or is there another subject you'd like to explore with fiction writing?

Jason: Honestly, I write whatever story idea pops into my head an appeals to me. I've also written dark humor and hard sci-fi. I would say my most comfortable area is probably fantasy, since I spent most of my adolescence and early adulthood reading books of that genre -- authors like Raymond Feist, Steven Brust, Ursula K. Le Guin, Anne Bishop, etc.

Lily: What kind of research is involved with writing a paranormal cop thriller?

Jason: Well, for The Killer Within, I'm embarrassed to say, I did practically no research, just all of the police procedurals/dramas I've watched on TV, CSI, NYPD Blue, etc. As I said, for The Dark InSpectre, I read a lot of crime novels. The details are clearly important in stories like these, but just as important is the tone, which is something I had in my head from early on. It's the sort of cynical worldview that dominates. Every character is working an angle, or up to something, you're just not sure what.

Lily: In your opinion, who was the best criminal in history?

Jason: I'm sure my view is colored because it's so recent, but I'd say the best known criminal would be Bernie Madoff. He bilked people for sums of money that are stratospheric, the kind of money that can erase national debts. But the very best criminal in history would be someone we've never heard of, because they haven't been caught.

Lily: Do you have any interest in novel writing or do you prefer sticking with short stories?

Jason: I certainly have an interest in novel writing. I wrote a few novels, but stopped about seven or eight years ago to concentrate on short stories since I wanted to explore that kind of storytelling. But every once in a while I go back to the novels and revise, revise, revise.

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Thank you, Jason, for taking the time to chat with us. Good luck with The Dark InSpectre and your future writing!

Jason Kahn's Website: http://www.jrkahn.com/
The Killer Within: http://www.damnationbooks.com/book.php?isbn=9781615720033
The Dark InSpectre: http://darkinspec.blogspot.com/
Abandoned Towers Magazine: http://www.cyberwizardproductions.com/AbandonedTowers/

Join us next week for an interview with Kim Richards, co-founder of Damnation Books!

Be sure to visit this blog on Oct 31 for an all day party and to read a never before seen excerpt of Bleeding Apple.

And... it's alive!

As of last night, editing is officially finished. I survived the experience.

Damnation Books has updated their website with all the info for the September 1st release.

Damnation Books Website

Eden Fell is listed under Titles in the left side menu, and my bio is under Authors. They've given Eden Fell a violence and sex rating of 4 out of 5. I find that hilarious, I actually giggled when I found out.

Definitely check back on Damnation Books September 1st for a copy of Eden Fell ebook.

(Only 4.50$ for the ebook, shameless promotion, etc).

Second Book!

Major changes are coming my way. A novella I wrote a few years ago has been accepted by Damnation Books, an ebook publishing company. The release date is September 1st.
This website will be completely redesigned to include the second book. As always, any questions or concerns, feel free to contact me.

Wish me luck!

Note: The novella is for mature readers only.